IndoorOrnithology's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cyroad]

Something seems off. I love the visuals, and the gameplay looks fun, but for some reason I don't find myself enjoying it very much. The sense of speed just isn't there for me. On the other hand, the actual design of the game is very well done. The blocks in the road are a bit hard to see though.

[Mr. Pew]

Pretty fun, nice style. Only problem is that the jet pack doesn't work properly. Sometimes the background shows a jet pack, but I get reverse jump, and sometimes it shows the down arrow but I get jet pack. Other than that, really fun. Deserves a mobile app.

[Amy's First Platform Test]

Not bad for a first game. Has a few problems though:
I died and the re spawn didn't work.
Also the collision detection for the spinning arrow thing seems off.
The scaling is a little off. (about a ten pixel white border around the game on my browser.)
I gave it 4 stars because it was a first try. If you find yourself an art style, make a character, and get some sounds, you can turn this into a finished game. Can't wait to see what else you create.

AmyJoy2213 responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! It was really helpful. Hopefully I can refine my skills and eventually create a full length game without glitches :)

[DJManiax]

This is really cool. Being a big fan of rhythm games, it really made my day. The only problem I see is that the notes can be off sync, and I have to choose between hitting the notes on beat, or getting a better score. Doesn't happen often though. Also, it is a bit too easy to get a fantastic. Still, a really fun game.