IndoorOrnithology's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Amy's First Platform Test]

Not bad for a first game. Has a few problems though:
I died and the re spawn didn't work.
Also the collision detection for the spinning arrow thing seems off.
The scaling is a little off. (about a ten pixel white border around the game on my browser.)
I gave it 4 stars because it was a first try. If you find yourself an art style, make a character, and get some sounds, you can turn this into a finished game. Can't wait to see what else you create.

AmyJoy2213 responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! It was really helpful. Hopefully I can refine my skills and eventually create a full length game without glitches :)

[Orborun]

Pretty good. A little hard, but very fun. A few things that should be added:
A key to replay a level
A "Press any key to dismiss" message on the tutorial screens
Slightly better graphics
I had a fun time with the game!

Invenis responds:

A key to replay a level: you can press R, it's mentioned in controls ;)

[Game of Life]

Very fun. I just wish you could drag the mouse to make lines, because clicking every single square you want alive separately is annoying.

Vulgarman responds:

Thanks, will do.

[Letter Weave]

Cool Game. The only complaint I have is very small. None of the menu buttons highlight when you roll over them. Not a big deal at all though.

fine0023 responds:

fixed menu buttons!